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The following is the first act and the next 4 acts will follow .... The teaser was posted yesterday. All this is copyright - Corinne Cullen Hawkins, all rights reserved. Feedback is welcome and encouraged. This script was written before learning that Wesley was leaving the show. Submitted in November 1990 and came back rejected in March. STAR TREK: "Inheritance" - ACT ONE FADE IN EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) enroute to Gama III at warp speed. INT. PASSENGER QUARTERS Nahj is looking around the room, curiously. Wesley is watching him. The luggage is left unpacked on the floor by the door, where it was dumped on arrival. Nahj finally heads for the computer terminal and starts accessing Starfleet history. He scans it at the same rate Data would use--ultra fast. He finishes the text within seconds. Wesley is astounded. NAHJ (swivels around in chair, carefree and excited) How lucky you are to be a part of all this. Will you show me the rest of the ship now? I want to see all of it. WESLEY How did you do that? NAHJ (genuinely puzzled) Do what? WESLEY Scan the databank so quickly. I thought only Data was able to process information so fast--at least I did until today. NAHJ It's not difficult. (getting excited again) I could teach you. It's like a trick, a mind exercise. You clear your mind, make it an open receptacle. Then you can process computer information, or anything else at that speed. Nevik taught me, and I'll teach you. Wesley is thunderstruck at Nahj's nonchalance and eager to start right away. WESLEY Now? NAHJ Would you show me the ship first? WESLEY Of course. (talking while they exit) Wait'll you see engineering. This ship is the fastest in Starfleet...and I can show you my new program in the Holodeck.... CUT TO: INT. - OBSERVATION LOUNGE Nevik and Picard are relaxing, looking at the stars and just getting into a good talk. NEVIK How do you put up with that Doctor clucking all over you? PICARD Dr. Crusher takes her duties seriously. NEVIK I see no reason for this protective attitude. I'm getting old--that's all. It happens to most. PICARD While you're on this ship the Federation is responsible for your welfare. That is a responsibility none of us take lightly. NEVIK (smiling) Your solicitude does you justice. I've been whining like an old man, which is just what I am. Now. Weren't you going to offer me some of that delicious vice of yours? Earl Grey tea, wasn't it? PICARD (to food dispenser) Two teas, Earl Grey, black. (carries the tea to where the two are sitting) CUT TO: INT. - SICKBAY Nahj is sitting on a biobed, dangling his legs over the edge, impatient to leave. Beverly is finishing a scan, checking her readings. She looks up. BEVERLY That's all, Nahj. NAHJ (indifferent, a little bored) I can go now? TROI enters sick bay. Beverly nods dismissal at Nahj and he leaves. TROI You are concerned. BEVERLY (beings pacing) I've checked all the information Starfleet has on Navaron physiology--it isn't much. Nothing on this brainstorm phenomenon Nevik insists is part of their normal aging process.Take a look at this. Beverly keys in wall computer and display shows a larger than life-size brain graphic with its electrical activity. A large fissure cuts through left and right brain, slightly askew of center and jagged, like a lightning bolt. The electrical activity is extremely high--a bombardment that does not let up.) BEVERLY This is Magister Nevik's brain activity. This fissure between left and right brain is widening. That, together with the extremely high electrical activity, may be causing his brain storms. I don't know for sure, but I do know this: If that fissure widens two millimeters more, he will die. TROI And Nahj? BEVERLY His brain activity is within normal parameters except for the high electrical rate. His synapses fire at a rate most humanoids achieve only under artificial stimulation. I can't determine if there is a connection between the brain fissure and the unusual axon-synapse rate--but I suspect there is more to this brainstorm phenomena than aging. CUT TO: INT. - OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard and Nevik are still talking. PICARD Have your views about joining the Federation changed any since the last time we met? NEVIK Fifteen years by your reckoning. (half sighs, half harrumphs) No. You know the problem. PICARD The Prime Directive. NEVIK We would not be on this mission, or any of our missions, if we followed the prime directive. I'm surprised the Federation agreed to transport us, considering our objective. PICARD It is unusual, but not without precedent. NEVIK Renar, now that's a lovely planet. (shrewdly) It doesn't still rankle, does it? PICARD Rankle? No. But it does puzzle me how you do it. No twist, no distortion in the Renar culture suggests an intervention took place. Yet you most assuredly saved them from nuclear destruction. NEVIK They live and prosper...a most pleasing outcome. PICARD You take every factor into consideration in your interventions in a way we never could. The results are astounding. The Federation could learn a lot from you. NEVIK (shakes his head slowly) The prime directive is a good rule, such wisdom in races so young gives me much hope. The Federation should stick to it....But for us Navarons--it will never do. Our whole purpose, to aid younger cultures with their growing pains... (puts cup down) but you've heard all this before. CUT TO: INT. - TEN FORWARD DATA enters. Ten Forward is moderately busy. GUINAN is behind the bar, fiddling with an authentic antique keg. GUINAN Data.., (gestures for him to join her) You're just what I need--a little dutch boy. DATA Little dutch boy? GUINAN (attempting to tighten spigot screws, readjust the spigot, but not having any success) This keg has been nothing but trouble since I picked it up at Starbase 164. First the barrel leaked, now the spigot. Makes you wonder if craftsmanship is dead. DATA Little dutch boy? GUINAN Here. Stick your finger in the spigot. That'll hold it. I need a radial spanner from engineering to fix this. I won't be long. Data puts his finger in the spigot and stops the drip. He watches Guinan start to leave. DATA Could not the replicator...? But Guinan is already gone. PAN TO: Nahj, Wesley and two young female ensigns are sitting at a table, very chummy and happy. A glowing sphere is in Nahj's open palm. He's just explained how to use the mechanism to contact anyone in the galaxy by enhancing and amplifying thought patterns through subspace. The starfleet officers are half-impressed, half dubious. NAHJ (hands the sphere to one of the women) Here. You try it. FIRST ENSIGN (laughs a little nervously) Who shall I contact? WESLEY Anyone. Your mother, father, sister, friend. SECOND ENSIGN How about that cute engineer on Starbase 164? FIRST ENSIGN Okay. My mother. (she closes her eyes, holding the sphere in her fist. It changes color as she concentrates. After a few moments she opens her eyes.) My mother said to be sure and wear a raincoat on Denebi IV. (beat) It rains a lot there. The whole group breaks into laughter. NAHJ Your mother will remember the experience as a pleasant fantasy, or a dream if she was asleep. But between people who understand the process, the Lirda opens up instantaneous communication across infinite distances. (beat) Nevik has a greater one--he can contact all the Navarons at once with it. FIRST ENSIGN (now totally sold on communication device) Starfleet could use technology like that. It would open up tremendous possibilities... NAHJ This is nothing. A toy. We have tools that go far beyond this. Nevik has a sensory amplification device, the Pharangar, that opens up every mode of perception--to infinity. When he wears it, he can learn anything he wants. He can know anything in the universe--for him there are no secrets. And when I pass phahr-quar I shall inherit that helmet. The three starfleet officers are totally enthralled by what Nahj is telling them. They can imagine themselves having such powerful knowledge. NAHJ (continuing) But I'd gladly give it up to hang around with people like you. That breaks the spell. They all laugh and the tension that had built up with the demonstration of the sphere is dispelled. (to Wesley, serious and earnest, a little conspiratorial) Come with me and I'll show you that trick I mentioned earlier. The two young men rise and nod good-bye to ensigns one and two. As they pass the bar, Wesley notices Data has his finger in the spigot of the keg. WESLEY Plugging the dike? Data thinks a moment and nods. CUT TO: INT. - CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is sitting at his desk, accessing computer terminal. PICARD Computer, show me all data entries on Navaron activities in the last fifteen years. The computer screen shows listing of half dozen entries. Two refer to Magister Nevik. PICARD Tell me full entries 2.7 and 2.8 COMPUTER Navaron history entry 2.7. Stardate 34824.7. While on a mission to Romulan planet Alpha Tao III, Genderia, apprentice to Magister Nevik, contracted a virulent form of the Navos plague and died. She was twenty-nine at the time and preparing for full Magister rank. This calamity necessitated the need for another Magister apprentice. Navaron history entry 2.8. Stardate 34924.1 Nahj Caputon of the Regendra cluster-family was invested as Magister apprentice at the age of seven. His registered sensory, communication, and intelligence quotient is in the top ninety-nine percentile of Navaron children tested. He is the only one to attain the sensory-communication index of 1.99. There is a chime. PICARD Enter. Troi walks in and stands at Picard's desk, a questioning look on her face. PICARD I'd like your impressions of Magister Nevik and his apprentice. TROI Nahj is very intelligent and his training has made the most of his abilities. He is lonely and eager for approval. He swings between arrogant self-confidence and insecurity. PICARD And Nevik? TROI Nevik is harder to read. His mind control is extraordinary.I sense from him great wisdom, gentleness, compassion. But there is something more underneath that. Something worries him. PICARD His mission to Gama III? TROI No. He is worried about something more personal. Something about himself. I don't know how to put it into words--it's more than a worry--it's anxiety, fear--I don't have words for it. PICARD Dr. Crusher told me of her preliminary findings. He could be concerned about his precarious health. Troi suddenly experiences tremendous pain. Picard stands and moves toward her as he reacts to the pain on her face. PICARD What is it? TROI (struggling for words) I...don't know. I feel a great internal struggle--much pain, anxiety. PICARD Where? Who? TROI I don't know. Its power is greater than anyone on the ship could be generating. CUT TO: INT. - PASSENGER QUARTERS Nevik is alone in his quarters. The room is dim and a candle burns in a ritual holder on the table. The Magister is wearing a translucent helmet which covers his head and face--the Pharangar. His hands are tense and white-knuckled. CUT TO: EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) We see what Nevik is experiencing--an energy field in space, a radiant, thin fog with random flashes. (As the story progresses the fog becomes thicker and the flashes more frequent.) FADE OUT END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Inheritance" - ACT ONE

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